Tuesday 1 February 2011

Script Planning

Scene 1 Ext Bus Stop Day


Voice over: I've never been that confident when it came to talking to girls always sitting quietly at the Bus Stop, see that boy sitting at the Bus Stop? Well thats me a long time ago during my awkward days.


Dave - Sitting down at Bus Stop


Kate - Walks by 


Dave - Sees her walk towards him and stands by the Bus Stop post


Kate - Turns around


Dave - Looks away and stares at a different location


Kate - Gets on the Bus


Scene 2 Ext Bus Stop Day 


Voice over: The next day I saw her again tried to talk to her... but that didn't turn out so well...


Dave - Tries to speak to her but finds it hard whilst being nervous
             Dave: " Hey...uh...my na..(pushed around by surrounding people at bus stop)


Kate - Ignores him


Dave - Gets knocked over by passers by who are trying to get on the bus


Scene 3 Ext Bus Stop Day


Dave - Tries to speak to her again
             Dave: Hi, you alright I'm Dave


Kate - Completely ignores him and takes the bus 


Dave - Monologuing towards himself 
Voice over: Guess she didn't hear me, gotta do something to get her attention. 


Scene 4 Ext Bus Stop Day


Dave- Brings in flowers and walks towards her until a Bee flies in


Dave - Swings flowers trying to hit the Bee, but hits parts of the Bus Stop 


Dave - Accidentally hits another guy in the face/head


Stranger - Stands up and looks intimidating towards Dave


Dave - Runs off while being chased by the stranger 
Voice over: Why does this sort of thing happen to ME!?!


Scene 5 Ext Bus Stop Day 


Voice over: Right if this doesn't work, then I got nothing else left...
Dave -Walks up to her and taps her on the shoulder 


Kate - Turns around and looks at him surprised 
            Dave: I made this for you 


Dave - Hands her a mix tape


Kate - Looks at it confused and makes several gestures with her hands 
            Kate (sign language): What is this? Is this a joke?


Dave - Realizing she is deaf he tries to say something until he notices the stranger from before
             Dave:..um...
            Voice over:...Aww crap...


Stranger - Walks up and makes gestures towards Kate
                    Stranger (sign language): Who is this fool?


Dave - Realizes the stranger is her boyfriend, walks away feeling sad and embarassed with                        himself
             Voice over:... guess she's taken...


Dave - Sits down at the same spot in the Bus Stop in Scene 1 looking sad


New Girl - Comes in to view of camera and sits next to him looking friendly with a smile 
                    New Girl - Hi I'm new here
                    Dave:...uh... hey
                    

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